by Kelsey
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Awwww...Jeni this is so sad! Things will get better!(Hopefully!) Maybe he's just going through a 'prick stage'. heehee! I'm always here for ya! |
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Youre clearly talented. another very cool poem. and you managed to keep the rythem and meter of the poem yet still gettin accross the ideas of the poem. |
by just me
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I really love this...it has so many emotions intertwined in it and............idk i just love it. |
by NeverBelieve
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The rythems great, the poems amazing and you got the idiea from the poem across great work! |