Awww, im sorry you feel this way but your poem is good. keep writing xxxx

YOUR LOVED ONE IS ALWAYS HERE WITH YOU JUST SHOT YOUR EYES AND LISTEN TO YOUR HEART. THE PAIN WILL GO AWAY SOON, JUST HANG IN THERE, AND PLEASE REMEMBER LIVING YOUR IFEF HAPPILLY DOES NOT MEAN THAT YOU FORGOT, PLEASE STAY STRONG!!!!!