Comments : That First Day

  • 17 years ago

    by Catherine

    I like this one. It's cool. But who would want a name like Crumpler? lol

  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...'only one who'...&...'and one who I could trust', dear.....'that' is for things, dear.....regardless of popular 'trends'...who....is for people......(and yes I do about whom but that.....is toooo technical under these conditions......

    Beyond these nitpicks, this is a lovely and well-written poem....(can't really imagine what else needs editing...of course, that's Your call..;-)....it made me feel warm...very nice...how fortunate to have a friend....like you...

    I Love it when you smile, Huggy....you make me smile too..........

    Gramma

  • 16 years ago

    by anthony

    I gotta stop reading comments b4 writing my own =/ kinda took me outta tune...but luved the poem i believe =/