Wow thats really heavy writing and those last two lines are just so strong. well done i like it. xxxxx hope you are ok xxxxxx

Cathy
This is really sad. Great job!

No clear emotion has completely set in
sadness and anger builds up within
I took you in my wings and carried you home
in return I was left alone

This was really touching.
Take care Cindy

This poem was full of real emotion. I was actually able to feel it. Great job.

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