I'm excited i'm the first to comment lol I really loved this, my favorite stanza was

Smell my perfume as I lean in close
and take hold of your hands in mine
you close you eyes and inhale the scent
let it relax you and unwind.

I love it 5/5

What a sensual poem full of love.
This really was great.

Beautiful ,passionate and meaningful , all three words fits so well for this poem.
"It touches your mind, body and soul"
Love this last line really a perfect end.

Thanks for all the comments!! this is nice 5/5

Beautiful poem. It shows a lot of emotion. The flow was excellent.
I loved it. You are a talented writer and are now on my favs.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

You had me from "see my desire" :)
Excellent poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it, its what love is all about. Thank you for sharing it.
tom

Good job