This is a good poem. well done and hope you are ok xx

It's good to give someone, something doesn't have to be perfect for friendship..
Before you give it to them, spell check it and grammar check... well you don't have to, that stuff bothers me though

I can't say much else because you didn't really follow a style or anything. The Rhyming could use some work, but it's really nice

I like this, Was very good :o)
Expressed alot
You write well
keep it up