Interesting poem. The structure sways adding to the unsettling feeling...though slightly countered by the decision made at the end. Over all a nice poem. Inspired by truth? Hope you're not down and out

This poem says so much.

There is nothing more you can do or say,
Simple enough as it is to cry,
Quite effortless to throw me away,
Sweet friend, I can no longer stay.

This really touched me.
Take Care Cindy

Good work, although your rhyming is always different, I think it can also be described as unique. I really liked this piece, reminds me of a good friend's old work :)

~jas~