Wow, so sad.
great job tho.
amazing flow, and words.

Hope he gets well

-Amberinaa*
xoxox

Sorry to her about your friend but his is a beautiful dedication to him.

My God, Sarah. I just...I'm speechless. This is beautiful. Heartbreaking but beautiful. I'm really sorry you have to go through this. It doesn't seem fair for you or your friend...especially at such a young age. Keep strong, love! I know you are! Ily.

` Glenduh.

So sad...

"The room is spinning - all are smiles
I'm walking on - I've been for miles"
^^^ Love the wording here! Really excellent poem, nice rhymes.

Awwww babe..that was such a nice poem...it's sooooo heartbreaking....is this really wat ur goin thru??
~dazzling romance

Very emotional, I enjoyed this poem. I will continue to read more of your work.

INCEE

Very emotional, I enjoyed this poem. I will continue to read more of your work.

INCEE

Nice

Wow your an amazing poet. I love this one alot. Your word choice is excelent 5/5