Nice poem, i love the rhyming
great work 5/5

I must say I don't really know what to say.. I think it's because the poem's so small? I guess...
This poem does have an amazing emotion/meaning to it, Which I absolutely love. It is so true, and most people need to realize that, but they don't, eh.

You did a great job,, keep it up.
teria.

I really liked this...I have tried this style so I know how hard they can be...yet you mastered it beautifully.