This may be another cliched rhyme
But to me this poem says everything
I followed in destiny's design
And proved it wasn't a hollow fling.

Thats speaks everything, beyond words,beautiful tribute to love.

--chavii--

It's a very sweet poem Gem. I truly liked this one. Good job with it!
Charisma*

Yeah. I really adore your way of writing. I love your poems. 5/5

Gem
I really liked this poem. Your love always shines in your work.

After everything we've done together
There's one thing I always knew
That we were meant to last forever
My life is meaningless without you

Loved this:)
Your friend Cindy

Beautiful poem. I liked the last stanza the best, but I loved it all.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

A little poem but filled with so much love and feeling. It was really beautiful. I loved it.

Awww this is good i like this. i THINK i know how this feels im not to sure. good job 5/5

Your poem was real and thats what I enjoyed about it the most. Your rhymes flowed well they didnt seem strained it al flowed well from one stanza to the next while leaving me feeling a lil warm and fuzzy inside ;o)
Good job - how did you go with the contest :o)
Risa

Great poem hun always enjoy reading ur work xx

Ohkay. i love this.
i totallyyyyy know how this feels. =]]
<3