Comments : Claws of life

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great piece.

    so now i stand here
    under bright lights and full of fear
    telling the world there is still one piece left of me
    enabling me to watch and see

    I really liked this stanza.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Wow Kiara - why havent I discovered you on here before? Your very talented you have a unique way with words, from the first line i was sucked in and compelled by your piece. I could relate to it, fantastic write!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wow at the end of it i was like i want to read more!! lol :) loved it! 99/5