Heh, we all feel like that - exept most guys who want a girl kinda like that...maybe. lol Thought it was a great poem, loved it, and maybe this would be a suprise to you, but those guys do exist, though few in number and vastly scattered, we do still exist. You will find him, dont worry. It had deep emotion and also tht undercurrent of sadness.
Dont stop writing,
am waiting for that red number by your name.
great job
5/5
-Black night-

I think it's a really good poem with lots of feelings in it.
Keep going and comment mine again if you want to.
Byee