Family is the most precious thing in this world...your love for your sister is strong and well conveyed in this poem!

Well from the sounds of it this was a horrible dream, turned it into a good poem though. Flowed well and the imagery was brilliant!! I finally got to read it though i had someone reading it down my ear at the same time lol.

This was very nicely written. My favourite stanza was this:

"Wrestling the gun from his grip
Aiming at his head
Releasing the trigger calmly
Shooting him stone cold dead."

I especially liked the ending of this. It's nice to see that you got inspiration from a dream; that's rather unique. And it's always good to hear when people get inspiration from different places.

Good work. 5/5.

Great poem. I was in suspense from start to finish.
But this lined didn’t make much sense…
My panic for her has grew.

Maybe it’s just me… Well I hope it’s just me because other then that it was great.

Wow thats a very strong poem its great to see that you can write something so good from a dream! well done!

Weaving in and out of traffic
Cutting across traffic lanes too
Realizing within moments
My panic for her has grew

i think that last line in that should be has grown. but in all, wonderful! 5/5

I really liked that poem . i'm the oldest of 5 kids 2 sisters and 2 brothers and i have to admit dreams about them being kidnapped are the worst. One time i woke up in the middle of the night after I had a similar dream to see where my brother was. Great job i loved it because I can really appriciate this poem because I can relate!!