I absolutely love this poem. It's hard to make every other line rhyme, but you've proved that it can be done. Awesome job. :]

Wow... I liked the couplet... mostly because it was really good and i couldnt write a couplet if i was forced to do so with a gun to my temple!!!!

anyway, lovely poem! 5/5

Allanah

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Love this poem. you did a really good job making it rhyme. keep it up 5/5

Thats sooo cute!!, thank you so much for all your beautiful comments on my poems hun! truly appreciated, and to answer your question, yes it did happen, but I'm finding it a bit easier to deal with now. 5/5 for your poem

xoxo Lucy

This is a great poem and an understandable poem, thanks for looking at my work,
nessa

THiS iS SUCH A GREAT P0EMS. L0VED iT !
KEEP UP THE G0OD W0RK !

FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)

Hey, great poem, i really liked it, it hasa great flow and you;re very talented, keep up the good work, and i'd love it if you would check out my poems and comment/rate them, thanks alot!!
Rachel<3

Wow this poem is wonderful :)

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Absolutly Love the poem... nicely penned. 5/5 For sure... ^.^

Outstanding, love it!!
I have added u as ma fav..!! :)