Wow this poem was really great sad but it expresses alot

You've got great emotion in this poem. It's easy to relate to and I'm sure that all of us have thought this way before. But to base this poem on poetic content--you could add some more imagery. If this was one of those poems that you just needed to let out, then it's fine.

I definitely prefer this write :]

"You've chained me down with expectations,"

That line was particularly memorable

L.x

Wow this poem is intense i can feel the anger and sadness
i loe it 5/5

This is absolutly amazing!!! Every single word!!! GREAT JOB!!!