I absolutely love it...i like the way you did it...is there a name for that?

Great job on this!

Courtney ..... awesome girly !

You have created such a creative write ... you keep amazing me more and more each day ...
A wonderfully penned piece and you should be very proud of yourself ... cuz I sure a proud of you sweets.

Awesome !

Awesome poem.....great in everyway!

To laugh is to torture,
Torture one you called friend,
Friend in whom you held so dear,
Dear sweet friend you make me fear,
Fear all the glances that are in my path,
Path of ridicule and betrayal,
Betrayal of unintentional fools,
Fools who take lust over love,
Love is smothered like a candle,
Candle in the wind.

Really love these last lines....5/5 All the best, Debbie

Awesome poem not what I expected by its title

Very good poem, some of the meaning behind the poem seemed inconsistent but the flow of the piece was excellent and you did a good job considering it did not rhyme, I really enjoy it when people go beyond the whole typical rhyme scheme. keep up the good work! 4/5

Wow. It was interesting. I've never read a poem in that type of pattern, but I must say I did love how you connected all of the ideas together and never went off track once. I look forward to erading your other ones (:

"To smile is to fear,
Fear every sidewards glance,
Glance into your sweet eyes,
Eyes that hold secrets,
Secrets kill the smiles,"

^^ I really loved the imagery those lines created as well as just the descriptions, they really got me. (:

5/5

I really liked how the last word at the end of eachline became the first one in the next it gave the poem sort of a kick or nice flare nice job!

You did another excellent job I just love the way you write, it was very sad, but it was just so good 5/5

Another great poem. I loved. I don't know what else to say.

I love this poem. I actually printed it out and stuck it on my binder. {yea i gave you credit for it} good job with it =]