Comments : You're my Everything

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I'm tired of holding it in,
    I want it all to be out.
    But I'm so unsure of it all,
    I hold so much elf doubt."

    I can relate to this stanza! (It is meant to say self doubt right? ;)
    But seriously, what an amazing piece you have penned here
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*