Comments : Someday

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I've felt that way so amny times it's not even funny. Excellent poem my dear. I'm trying to start to read and comment more since I've been "away" for sometime, and this was a great poem to start that new trend with.

    ♥Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautifully written!
    I loved the opening and from then it kept getting better.
    I thought the flow was good throughout and I loved how the ending was filled with hope.
    Beautiful!