The start was so magical. well done. i am so happy i read this, so much love in it.

5/5 david

Short, sweet, and simple .

the words always said
but never really meant
just letters from the mouth
like an envelope their sent
`Favourite stanza . But question . "Like an envelope their sent" doesn't make sense ... their is possessive ... What did you really mean ? Just telling you (:

Nicely written 'tho . No complaints .
..__MiNDYY

I agree with BROKENREALITY
it was nicely written....
i loved it....i thought the first stanza was adorible...i love your poetry...don't ever stop...

Tht is amazing ! ....
wish i was tht gud
keep it up xxxxxxxx corrina xxxxxxxx

Thanx for the comment. you have amazing talent 2. love your poems and quotes!! keep goin:>

Omfg that was really goood :) u shudd really keep it up ur amazing at it

One thing, capitolize your i's. I think there was like one, maybe to you had there that weren't. Secondly, It's very common to actually capitolize the first letter of ever line, it's just what people do. if that's not your style, dont worry about it. just a suggestion. overall, a sweet poem though. beautiful. 5/5.

This one gave me chills.
5/5