But all sweet, melodic souls
Vanish with the same old cry:
"Why didn't you go looking for me?
It was your choice to let me die"

i really liked that bit!
Very good
-bam

Play your sweet melody,
for as long as you can,
make out of your life a parody,
don't fall due to men!

I was already lost
Why don't you see
I was haunted by the past
I was a sweet melody

Thoser were my favorite line... It was writen beautifully! I really enjoyed reading it. It was short and simple but didn't lack anything. I think it was very powerful=]