Comments : No End

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I love this poem so much! It tells so much truth and puts it in perspective. This truly is a beautiful piece of work.

    My favorite part was:

    The more endings you make,
    the more beginnings you create.

    The words work together so well :D. Keep up the good work, 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. I really like the part about the energizer part. It reminded me of a bunny. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow..I don't even know what to say.
    What could I possibly say that could even begin to sum up how I feel about this?
    Nothing.
    This is just...beautiful.
    The meaning, the emotion and depth, the way it was written...I love every aspect of this.
    I wouldn't change a single thing of this..perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very deep poem, you wrote this with such power and few lines are amazing, I must say that the ending is absolutely breath-taking, it makes you think...
    Bravo, another great poem of yours and honestly love this one.