This poem had a powerful feeling and you, I think did a very good deed to those loved ones. You created something that will always be around to share for those who want strength. I think you have done a great thing. Thank-you. I also liked how you made the poem blend and easy to read. It made for a masterpiece that really should be read by others as well. Great job!

I like how you wrote a poem based on something *real*. I mean, don't get me wrong, poems about relationships, love, etc *are* real, but they're constantly done, over and over again.

You took something new, something right before your eyes (in one sense or another, depending on if you were actually there, or if you just heard about this on the news, etc) and you wrote about it. And that, I find very admirable.