Wow thats superb write , the way you translated an incident in poem with moral ,makes it very enjoyable read.
The flow is perfect and so is the usage of words.
Great write gem.

Take care
chavii.

Gem,

A good lesson to learn, my friend.

The flow was good, the message even better.

Keep up the good work.

Always,
Jeannie

Gem
Great message. there have been many who have had their drinks spiked and worse things have happened to them.
Take Care
Love Cindy

Nice! i like the story

5/5

~~rikki~~

Another superb poem with a great message.
Excellent.

This definitely has rhythm in it! 5/5

A wonderful poem. Great flow & nice creativity. & The worst thing is, that this is actually true & happens in every day life... =[ What the world has come to... It's quite sad. Spectacular poem hun, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This is most deff. a great lesson.
i loved this one babe.
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Wow this brings accross a great point and
a lot of people will read this and probbaly think
about it before they go out again
great job hun
and thanks for the comment!
5/5 babe

xx.chelsea.xx

5/5

This is just so cool, as i have always been saying, you can write on anything and this shows ur talent.
Loved the message in the poem

keep writing

all the best and take care

Amazing message! people should totally listen to it!! i totally agree though!

luv alwasy---tara