Comments : Brian.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Very good Jess...

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I want to come see you,
    Maybe tomorrow, even today.
    Even if you don't want me to
    I definitely will anyway.
    ` I love that stanza .

    You are a miracle in yourself
    Even though you don't think so.
    `Beautiful lines <3

    I feel like some of your rhymes were forced, but even so, your poem expressed sweet emotion in a simple, beautifull manner .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by The Herald

    The force is strong with this one
    awooo

  • 16 years ago

    by The Herald

    The force is strong with this one
    awooo