Good job

Nice. It rhymed easily and the meaning was clear. Very good

This was a nice short piece. Very simple, which isn't always a bad thing. Although, I'm not sure I would have put this poem in the 'Dark Poems' section.

Brad

P.S. thanks for your vote and comment on my poem 'Something I Wish To Say', I'm glad you liked it, obviously, lol.

Very good. i like poems that rhyme, and this one did, and had nice flow to it.
:)

I can relate to this one, you have good choice of words through the whole piece and it's greatly written.
5/5