Hey, um i would really appreciate it if you didnt, cuase everything i wrote i ment or felt, and i dont really handed in as your work. Sorry.
Love Mel

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I loved that… I really loved it. I love how you’ve used personification throughout the poem, and the ending was amazing "His name is blade". You’ve done a great job describing how cutting helps you, when you feel like you’ve got no one. I like this part;

"he cuts her good
he cuts her deep"

I loved the way you’ve done repetition of "he cuts her"– it has great affect. I just love how you’ve personified it all. To improve I suggest you use punctuation but other then that, its an excellent read! A well deserved winner! Keep it up! xx

(might have posted this comment twice lol :S)
Absolutely loved it! it was so deep and dark, totally unlike any other cutting poem I've read.. it really got to me, keep writing xxx

I love the different approach you took to writting a self harm poem. well done.

Wow omg this is the best i've read cause i can totally relate to it i loveeee it

This is a good story poem.

keep up the good work!

I rly like this one too:)