Wow. thats outstanding jazzy. 5/5 its vivid and amazing to read its full of emotion and i love it

Nice poem, very well written.......... tey so sad, i hope things get better for you, just dont forget one thing(there is always a bright day after a dark night) never give up in life as it is too short to spend it with worries.
believe that time changes, and have hope for a brighter tommorow as there is people who really care about you.
once again a perfect poem that deserve nothing less that a 5/5.

Hey Girlie...your getting better and better everytime! this poem is very vey very well written. i hope that everything is ok and that everything gets better and don't forget i'm always here for you! *gives you 20 stars*
love ya bunches
Amber Dawn