I love this...it's original and unique in style and concept.
The first few lines had me hooked and it just kept getting better.

Wonderfully pened, I loved the originality within this poem. Nice style and a unique feel which I liked. good Job.

Peace, Joe

Wow I loved this poem it sounded a bit like a speech in the beginning but the more I continued reading the more I got envolved in the poem itself. The shortness of the lines made it explode right off the computer screen. My favorite part was how you kept it all as one stanza that made the power just grow and it looked much better. Nice job.