Yay I'm the first person to comment this poem!! might I say this poem was very well written!! it made me think a lot so nice job!

Hi, it's a really beautiful poem, normally I don't like to read long poems because they usually start to get boring after a while, but this one really wasn't, I actually really enjoyed reading it and it's so beautifully written! Definitly a 5/5! And thx for commenting my poem!

-xxx- Isis

Wow. Great poem! the messege you had within your poem was amazing. The flow was wonderful and I love what your poem reflected on! Not a single thing I could find wrong! God Bless 5/5
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Wow.
This seems extremely long.
But it was well worth the read.
There's nothing really to criticize in.
It was an amazing poem.
It seemed as though
You had this thought for a long time
And it just exploded on paper.
Lol.
I love it when that happens to me.
Lol.