Wow.....excellent job! Reminds me of a picture I was looking at today.
Very sad....makes you think about time.
Take Care
Your friend
Cindy

As slivers of pain fall
Weeping upon the mind
^^^
My favorite lines as I've told you already but ... I wanted to tell you again.

Isn't it amazing how a picture just grabs you and word begin to flow.
I looked at over 550 pics today and that one just spoke so much. 2 little objects yet so many stories can be told.

Excellent write Auntie !

A good and sad free write. It's neat to see you do free style poetry but I do like your rhyming better. I've got some free styles too...mostly on allpoetry.com but they are good when you dont' feel like trying to rhyme. I consider them to be good release poems when you don't feel like being structured. Anyhoo...good job!
Charisma*

I can't write free verse to save my life, lmao
But you make it look so easy, it's inspiring!
Do you ever have a bad day at writing poetry? lol
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

I loved it!!
It described that picture perfectly. :]]

Another flawless poem.
keep it up, hun.

5/5