Short but sweet, I would have enjoyed this if you had wrote a bit more because I feel a lot more could have out of this poem. Still, very good and very to the point. Keep up the great work!

~jas~

The reption really worked wonders for this poem. The flow was great, the word choice was perfect, and the emtion was strong. another job well done. Thanks for all the comments. I love your work, so keep writting.