Comments : A Stolen Moment Shattered

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Excellent write! the rimes are good. the comparison between 2 similar situations but with however 2 completely different feelings felt! and finally the disguise part was good too. 5/5 no doubt!! great job

  • 16 years ago

    by UnhealthyExpectations

    Wow that was truely amazing 5/5