Awe so sad. I really liked this poem it is short but filled with more then enough emotion. Keep up the great work. 5/5

It was full of emotion but didn't have a flow to it. Try making each line it's own, I think the flow gets messed up one lines goes with the next. I don't know how to explain what I am trying to say.LOL. Hope this helps though.
Tyanna 4/5

Beautiful poem well penned with deep emotions ..very heart-felt..i liked the choice of words in this one..

Great job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

Hey,
another great poem, it certainly didn't deserve to be down voted, I think its a good poem, the words are beautiful and held a strong sad emotion, I give you a 5/5
kisses stephanie

So depressing but i enjoed reading it every once in a while a light shows through the dark room
laura

I wish this poem was longer.I felt as if there was more to the story you were trying to portray.But it was really sad, unfortunatly short, but I liked it.5/5 again.

<3Amber

Eh i didnt really like the poem i didnt really get into it it was so short! it was still good 4/5

Ahh one of those fun poems with the letters spelling things out. I really need to try one of those soon because I'm starting to see them more often. I enjoyed the title and the poem. I'll give it a four.

Even though this is a short poem it is very well done says a lot for a short one the flow was nice. sad

Now this poem, it sends the right message out, but the way you've written it, wasn't the best. Maybe adding a few more punctuation marks.

.:CiiNDY:.

Awww.. this is so sad. what i imagine is seeing a friend cry. hearing them saying stupid things n u r just there just hearing them seeing them. making you die cuz ur words might not help but u being there for them is what makes them stronger.
for me idk there was sumthing else missing. it didnt give me the woo.. like ur other ones i have read. but i do like it. 4/5 for me.

TaKE CARe,
Frenchy

Nothing was missing here. I think you said everything you wanted to say. It's unfair for me to say otherwise. I am able to both empathize and sympathize. Though it was short...you were able to say so much, and I think that's what made this so appealing. I say job well done and 5/5.

-Rolo

This one was VERY emotional. Its not until the second stanza that you fully understand the meaning but that only make you want to go back and read it again.

Very sad and expressive.
5/5

Thank u again.