5/5 wow its a beautiful poem it makes you think. your poems are fantastic you've outdone yourself again, i just hope you are going to be ok. keep wrting

Beautiful and deep...

I feel that way every day but dont show it cry cry cry

Good job. Hooked me right in. Kinda dark though but i liked it. I kinda got lost in it though and the ryhming slacked but other than that great!! 5/5