W00p
A great piece Charisma.
Long time no speak stranger.
Now this poem had a title that made me HAVE to read it right away, lol.
Some great metaphors sweets
5/5
*gem*

Beautifully penned. The flow was excellent. Very well put together. Your word choice is good too, none of your rhyming is forced. Nice job!

Pretty much amazing. Great work as always. Definantly worth a 5/5.

A VERY good description of love :) never seen it from that angle :) loved it!!! 99/5

The last stanza is my favourite, it is so beautiful.
I thought there seemed to be quite a few fillers in this one, but apart from that it is still a beautiful read and a wonderful write.