Comments : Believe What You Must

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Awe...great poem 5/5. i loved it. i love how you said Believe What You Must before every line.

    xoxo kisses

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow. Wonderful. Astonishing.
    A few words to describe this poem.
    The flow was flawless, the emotions were clear and strong, and the word usage was amazing. You really do have wonderful talent.

    "Believe what you must, feel what ever you feel,
    In your head my problems are fake, nothing is real.
    You see the scars, call me an attention hog and freak,
    But if you'd just take a second, you'd see I'm weak."

    ^ This stanza hit me hard, especially those last two lines. Wonderful poem, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.