I loved the heading. it made me interested in wat this poem was going to be about. and i was not dissappointed. it was amazing in every way.

5/5 always. david

Thats a very well written poem!
nice use of words
keep it up!

Thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me

This reminding me Billy Talent :]
It was very good, very powerful.
You controlled your emotions as you got your point across which in my opinion is a task not very easily accomplished by many writers today..seems to almost come natural to you? Lol. Good job Darling.

5.5
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