Comments : Passing Days

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh well done. lots of ppl have read this poem. i would have expected more to comment and vote. so easy too. just say "perfect!" which it is.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Hm...the last stanza kinda lost the poem a bit...like there was more to it or something. But it was an excellent write. I can relate to it so much...especially with the 1st two stanzas. It's like you wrote exactly what I went through. Great write!! keep strong.x

    ` Liz =]
    5/5