The feeling in the poem is overwhelming and this is written well to express the pain. Keep tough and keep writing.

Beautiful poem. Nice surprise in the end. I liked the brief use of words like "woe" It added...sophiscation.

Your poem is soo deep and touching.. I loved it good job !! well done 5/5

Wow this is really amazing, i love your writing

great job

brittany (MD)

This was so sad, yet so beautifully written.
I loved the ending stanza, I thought it had a lot of impact.
Flow was flawless, and the imagery created vivid pictures for me.
Wonderfully done.