This is an awesome poem.

I thought I would copy what I said in the contest about this poem, into an actual comment, too.

This poem was wonderful to read. So dark and somewhat creepy, yet amazing. There were no mistakes, apart from “infront” – that should be two words, not one.
“Flushed crimson by the sun.” – beautiful imagery here.
“But still as silent as the ocean.” – I found this a little strange. I don’t know about anybody else, but personally I do not associate the ocean as “silent.” Calming, beautiful, filled with tranquality, yes. Silent? Not so much.
“They walk amongst the free.” – you used this line both in the last and second from last stanzas, which made it appear overused and messed with your flow a little bit.
“The river of the blood.” – again, beautiful imagery created here. Altogether, nice work.

:)

:| Sorry about that last comment. Wherever "�" this is appear, it should be quotation marks. Lol.

Good imagery, great choice of words, I've had a feeling like I was there.
5/5