Comments : How Many Lights Do You See?

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Rae

    Powerful! I like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's a neat imagery with the lights. adds visualization to the poem. nice job with flow and rhyme. Good piece!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this one a lot. The whole idea of the lights was amazing and unlike one i've seen before.
    An excellent piece of poetry
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...
    The imagery is pretty, the flow was flawless, and I liked the repetition.
    I thought you opened greatly and from there it just kept getting better.
    As always, wonderful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh, I really liked this, it was sad but again had a happy vibe to it, keep it up Darling.

    "How many lights go out each day?
    Each one for things you couldn't say."

    ^^ I really love those lines. =)

    heartchuu.