I thought this was pretty good, i had to read it twice to fully understand it but hey thats how most poems are... the cows go cluck and the chickens go moo threw me off at the begining but i got it... good job

I like it...its puts a new spin on heartbreak </3
~if u dont mind i'm new to this site so could u read and comment my poems, thanx~

I love it...if only right....i give it 5/5 lol i love it...keep it up anread some of mine if ud like

This is so good and has a depth that is brought out by the simplicity I LOVE IT!!!

<3,Leah

Really good :)
the short lines make it different and awesome :)

Hahahaha. omg. i love this style of writing. do me a favor and if ur gonna read some of my poems. make one of those poems "a cold day in hell" this poem reminds me alot of that one. i freaking love it! 99/5

Nice.,., kinda compLicated but thats what makes it nice to read.,., =)

p.s.
pLs do aLso take time to read my poems,, kind of a beginner so its not that good.. put some comments too.. thank yah!!! xoxoxo!!! =]

This is AWESOME! i love the complex way of explainging that you used...
its great!

XxAshleyxX

Great job!! i really like it!