I like this poem! its very fark and seems throught out...5/5 =]

This po3m is diff3r3nt po3m, i lik3d it alot!

Amazing piece. I was absolutely taken by it. So eerie and so unique. Wonderfully written and it told its message so well. You're a great writer. I'm glad someone of your abilities left me a comment. Thanks.
<3Raych

I love this!
It was original and creative and a refreshing read.
The imagery used created vivid pictures, the flow was great throughout, and the ending was fantastic.

Wow!!!
this is crazy talented!!!
u r an amazng writter!!!
5/5

jenie

Beautifulll poem, love the quill-hand metaphor, oh and thanks for the comment:)

Very well done. The flow was wonderful and the poem was great! I could not find any mistakes. God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

I wish I could write more than just a one-liner comment on this poem. But I like everything about it and your ending was quite strong.

I thought that this poem was written very nicely and was pretty solid for the most part. I like the fact that you kept it short and got the point across quick. The flow was great and the words suited the poem perfectly. great write 5/5

I absolutely loved this poem!!
But, as I stated two poems before; punctuation can harm it.
It did just a bit with the flow in this poem. But, the flow was decent.
The poem on the other hand, it was outstanding!
Easily related to, once again.
Which I absolutely love with poems, along with them coming from the heart.
Just as the others, this one did as well.
Which made it the perfect poem. :]

Great Job. :]

Oh, I loved the idea of it as well!!

I really like the words you used in this poem. :) keep up the good work!

Wow. That was chilling. The flow was absoultly perfect. The word choice was excellent. the emtion was strong, and clear. I loved the idea behind it, it is easy to relate to.