Great poem hun xx

Gem
Wonderful poem. Your words I'm sure bring back childhood memories to many.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Love Cindy

You have such a knack for structure poetry, Gem. I have been reading your poems for awhile now, and have never been disappointed in any of your writes. You can do these kinds of poems with such flair. You make it look so easy. But having tried a few in my time, I know how difficult they can be to put together.

Bravo, an excellent job on this one.

Always,
Jeannie

I've always loved mirored poems, and you did just that. Like Twisted Heart, I have tried before... and failed. To be able to complete one this good, well, you're incredible :D. Good Job.

Hatori
Cursedforlife

I adore this!!
The flow was flawless, and the imagery was beautifully done.
I think you did a wonderful job with this form of poetry.

Excellent poem by the way I am a madonna fan in a big way I am guessing u r too.

Lol sooooo sophisticated love lol, i mean wow i loved it this is the first type of this poem i ave ever read :D

xxx alex xxx