Comments : Wretched Prison

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    It feels like this could have been a longer poem 5.5 tho i really like your choice of words.
    fav lines

    She stares them down
    her malicious grin never failing to intimidate.
    His love has not tarnished,
    Despite her attempts to desecrate.

    thx so much for taking time to read my poem

    ~natalie

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    A very strong start to your poem, and it managed to hold out throughout the entire poem. There were some verses where it seemed to be weaken, but the entire thing was very strong. The words you chose were perfect, and you kept the vivid imagery going. Great job on this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady C

    Deep, dark and daring. Love IT, really good! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Great poem very well written. The flow was good as well as the structure.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    This is wonderfully written. you did a real good job writing it! keep up the good work.