Comments : A Beautiful Lie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    You penned this poem perfectly to the category. I really enjoyed the passion and emotion this poem flowed with. Each line and stanza seemed to be written directly from the soul. Great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I felt the emotion put into this. And I can relate to it a lot. Sad...but beautiful write. The last stanza...I just loved it. It ended perfect. Excellent write. Keep writing! 5/5

    Liz =]

  • 17 years ago

    by TravTagz

    Not gonna lie I usually don't read poems this long but I'm glad I did because this was a great poem... I'm right there with you and I know how you feel

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Loved it.