Good jod

Great keep it up

-Jamie

Ah thats so sweet great work:]

So sad and heartfelt! 5/5

Oh that's so cute!! i wish i could write like that!! you've got a talent that's for sure!!

I know how this feels.
I too have known a few of those great people who left this world so early. the reason to some things will always be a mystery.
Thanks for sharing this poem with us!
Marjan

I like ur poems there very good, thanks for sharing :) nice work

Another one thats really good keep it up really liked it

AWWWW!This was really sad!I am so sorry for your loss...but anyways the poem was good and the emotion was deep.The flow was pretty good...all in all I give this a 5/5

<3Amber