Aww that was so sad. Liked it alot.

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Only error I found. Other than that, the poem really potreyd about a little cute girl becoming a teenager and still as pretty as she is on the outside becomes an ugly brat inside. Lol. Well done! God Bless 5/5
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Once again.
To me, this stanza was random

Her money kept in a piggy bank
when it shook, she heard it clank.

Throughout your poem.
You kept mentioning money.
It was just kind of randomn to me.

nobody else did, she lost all [[they're]] trust
It's "their"
Like I said.
I'm not really into the suicide and cutting.
I'll lower my vote because of that.
I'm sorry :[

So intense! what a story... touching.

good job!

This poem is really good! i loved it!

GREAT POEM 5/5