Nice wording. well done. the only point i would like to make is that you should try different styles of poetry.

5/5 tho. excellent poem. David

Your f**king poems are so good... you are a really talented writer! definatly makes my favourites!!

keep it up 5/5
much love .xx

Haii I Lubd Diis Poem Was So Sweet Nd Flowful...
5/5
Keep Up Da Gr8 Work
xx