Excellent Job! This collab is really great. Courtney you and Luanne did a great job together.

Porcelain beauty in the hands of time
deceptive bite, into a lovers flesh
living on a borrowed, chime
heart dying a thousand deaths

Can not help but feel the lies,
They are breathing down my neck,
Always thinking of how I hurt you,
Remembering to keep myself in check

These stanzas really stood out to me.
Take Care Cindy

I had such a wonderful time doing this collab Courtney .... between both of us having to go to work at different times we managed to get it all put together .....

Had a blast girly and we must do one again sometime...

Take care
Luanne

Hmm. Interesting. It was a great collab from two obviously very talented poets, and I loved it.

"Porcelain beauty in the hands of time
deceptive bite, into a lovers flesh
living on a borrowed, chime
heart dying a thousand deaths "

^^ That stanza really said something to me, I don't know what but I loved it!

5/5 (:

OoOo!!! You used some extravagant words! I loved this poem and everything about it nice job!

That wuss sweet! 5/5

This poem is great, you girls did a perfect job.
I like the vocab use in it, it just made the poem so perfect,

Porcelain beauty in the hands of time
deceptive bite, into a lovers flesh
living on a borrowed, chime
heart dying a thousand deaths

this stanza just stood out with a really great message, keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

I love your writing you do it so beautifully my favorite stanza was,

Porcelain beauty in the hands of time,
deceptive bites into a lovers flesh,
living on a borrow, chime
heart dying a thousand deaths.

Keep it up you do so well 5/5

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.

Wow......i loved this poem. its great. this poem means a lot........im glad i took the time to read it.....keep it up, ur a good writer

LYRIC